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Okay, so I've taken Incognito's advice and edited a few sentences and grammatical errors in the story thus far... I'm working currently on the third part, so once that's finished ...

Okay, So after a few of you commented on the "Torment" part, I decided to rack my brain for another word to replace it with and came up with "Affliction" ...

Hi Evi :) First of all, thank you for your review, I have taken some of what you suggested and have adjusted this piece accordingly. :) You have not yet ...

G'day Mars. First, thank you for bringing the incorrect gramma to my attention. I can't stand it either. I've made the changes that you pointed out, because I felt they ...

Hey nixonblitzen, Cheers for your input. I've made the adjustments that you have suggested, except for one. I have the commas in place, because they are there for you to ...

Hey Angie, Cheers for the star, and for taking the time in reading this! :) After I had written this piece, I trying to decide on whether to format it, ...